30/10 100 Word Challenge

By Anonymous -
Prompt: flame, swimming, celebrated, white, tomorrow

 I lit my candle on that night.
A lonely flame, swimming in the haze, radiating warmth.
An outcast, apart from a sea of light. I sit alone, away from the mass of people swathed in a colourful array.
White.
Enveloping me, folds and creases holding me tight.
Dirty.
Purity stained with the grime of the streets, a rat, I sit hunched on the steps, arms wrapped around my bloodied knees.
Floating, bobbing in the waves, an offering set out to the world beyond, a beacon in the dark. Tomorrow, this light will be celebrated.
And I will light my candle.

Comments

  1. Anonymous29 October 2017 at 22:30

    Hi Amisha,
    I love your writing it's so captivating.
    Fahizah S

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  2. TLA29 October 2017 at 22:34

    Amisha,

    This is a moving piece of poetry. You've taken the five words from the prompt and crafted them into something special.

    Tracey A.
    San José, California, US

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  3. Molly4 November 2017 at 12:38

    This is beautiful, you have some real talent. Well done.

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  4. Anonymous9 November 2017 at 14:45

    I agree with the comment written by Molly. I love reading your writing - in any style - Amisha.

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